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The Egotist

I stand in front of veiled soul
to ponder thought and take control

One of fame and fortune filled
that holds the reign and crown instilled

I rise, defend and separate
and find I am most desperate

To keep my stance of rigid thought
not let my soul to then be sought

Psychedelic prisons hold me here
my ego lives and thrives on fear

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  • The Fun House silver member
    December 14, 2008

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    I like the sentiments of this one but it seems a tad forced with the rhyme here and there. I do love the ending lines though