Restless heartache stirs
rapid firing of emotions
casting smoldering sparks
that seeth inside my soul
Dawn echoes haunting soliloquies,
awaking my spirit to enchantment
I wander along hollowed roadways
pondering the depths of you
In search of my yearning hearts
retort on this trail of splendor
created by a beguiling spirit
that has bewitched me
like a misty mourning fog
awaiting the sunrise
Author notes
http://th04.deviantart.com/fs39/300W/i/2008/334/6/f/The_fog_at_the_end_by_Snakeraid.jpg
A contest entry
- Picture Prompts - Reserve - no more than 20 lines by Cannonsfire.
3999 points, ended December 4, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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third couplet - 'awaking'- possible correction for stronger visual would be 'awaken' -
This is a good one from you hon and I enjoyed this read! Good luck in the contest
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