It's time once again
The 5th out of 5 prayers
Not enough to show even an ounce
Of my gratitude towards you
I take both hands
Dirty from the day
Clean 3 times
And finish my
Wudu
Now I stand before you
Covered and cleansed
Lord hear my prayers
Once again.
A contest entry
- wash me... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended December 13, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Having a conversation with God by trekkergirl.
550 points, ended January 18, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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this is nice. But again it is not about a conversation you are having with your God. It is nicely written though and I am glad that you did submit it to this contest because I did enjoy reading it.
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I like the logical emotions you poured in the poetic journey here with so much beauty around the woreds..thanks for your entry...
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thank you for your comment! This poem is very near to me as you can see. Take care
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