As sunshine disappears beneath horizon.
Gentle waves rock, playing a lullaby.
Feel his heart saying words of love blazon,
silence surrounds, like a sleeping baby.
His arm wrap around, while the night closes
Lips touch as if a butterfly flew by.
Kissing his breath, evening air condenses,
hearing mountain echos giving reply.
Share rest of my life into eternity
As paradise lurks around the corner
Life will begin with all it’s dignity
Two solitary hearts found their owner
His eyes intently look into my heart,
letting me understand he’ll never part.
Author notes
4. Speak from your heart (Whatever you feel)
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Noir mariposa...x
Sandra R Reynolds
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A contest entry
- "In the moonlight" by hopelesspoet.
1000 points, ended December 9, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Shine The Brightest In A Writers Sky (( Looking For New Favorites)) by HereComesTheSun.
700 points, ended February 16, 34 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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You have created a lot of beauty and emotion with your
words. This forms seems to fit your style quite well.
The ending is very beautiful. I really enjoyed reading
this.
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Positive: well done with the bronze first of all and great use of similes metaphors and imagery (my favorite) i was a happy girl when you didnt describe the scenery yet told a story around it great work
Negative: nothing to say
thanks for entering -
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ah the first entry in my contest =] first let me say thank you for entering, i really appreciate it! this poem is absolutly beautiful. the imagry you painted in amazing and i truely just loved it. good luck and once again thank you for entering!
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touching and lovely!
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Awsome
I feel the love in this poem and it gives me a good image this is finalist material for sure it was what i was looking for when it comes to writing from the heart good luck in the contest thank you for entering
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