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Snow Come Quick

All the children in the house
Are waiting for the snow to come out
It is like a white cold sheet
It's just like a woolly sheep
A snowman with a carrot nose
Button eyes and woolly clothes
Snowballs rushing through the sky
Hear the wind as they fly
Santa's sleigh swooping by
I wonder if he will take me for a ride?

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  • How cute! Yes, Christmas is so excting. I can't wait for it to come next winter, so I can make decorations and listen for Santa on the roof!


  • mcope8050
    December 15, 2008

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    Very nicely done MEW2,, you really put words together nicley,,,wouldn't it be a nice trip,,, keep watching, He will be coming soon and am sure he could use a good helper this year,, wear your coat,, it may get cold.
    MERRY XMAS


  • Walking Oxymoron gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    This is lovely, I bet you're proper excited for christmas to come, aren't you????

    My little sister is too, and she's nine.


  • spirit rising
    November 29, 2008
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    this is lovely, you have managed to pen a picture of lovely winter fun and christmas, i can picture all the children huddled at the window waiting for the snow to fall and settle, and the snow man with his carrot nose and wooly hat! its really festive and how great are you for giving your little sis a chance at writting with you, well done you!! x x


  • Hikari Lady
    November 29, 2008

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    Awww!! Such a sweet, sweet poem. I liked how you penned this and how you rythmed your lines. And if I were Santa I'd take you for a ride to wherever your heart desires.

    Much love
    ~Noor

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    November 29, 2008

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    lol. I'm sure Santa will take you for a ride. He'll look at you with a smile and say, 'Wanna come sailing through the sky with old St. Nick?' Very nice poem.
    Brian


  • storiesuntold gold member
    November 29, 2008
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    This is cute

    Oh I love the magic within this time of year

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