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The Truest Love

I think the truest love is the love of Bella and Edward
they loved each other for themselves
they were there for each other all the time
true love is the best
i wish all loves were like theres
not afraid to love.
not afraid to care about each other.
not afraid to be themselves.
true love is best
The truest love

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  • purplemoon
    August 29

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    Hmmmm... this a tricky one to judge. It sounded like you were mostly convaying true love is the best but it is very good and you did use the edward and bella concept so i say it pretain to twilight. Very nice write. Bravo.! Well done!

    Thanks for the entry.
    Kathryn


  • SingMeToSleep
    February 16

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    I like the idea of this poem. However, I felt that it was a bit redundant. Also, your punctuation was inconsistent.

    Thank you for entering and good luck.


  • The Hardest Goodbye
    December 22, 2008
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    thanks for entering


  • The Hardest Goodbye
    December 17, 2008
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    Loved it !Best love story in history! Better than romeo & Juliet haha xD


  • wiltedvamp18
    December 13, 2008
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    hecks ya!


  • TwilightDazzles
    November 29, 2008

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    This is sweet. Yes, we all wish we could have an Edward. Good job, thanks for entering and best wishes

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