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Departure

Missing image
Sky colored tears
reflecting a heavy heart's
departure of love.

A contest entry

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 29, 2008
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    beautifully expressive... x


  • Beauty Of Silence
    November 29, 2008

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    wow. this is really sad. but beautifully penned. wonderful write, keep penning and all the best in the contest


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 29, 2008
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    this is a lovely yet sad write .. "departure of love"

    Good luck