bruised-
are the innocent
buds
in a garden
of weary.
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Author notes
picture inspiration;
http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2428/759.jpg?1227972020
photography by ~ Paul Kopeikin
A contest entry
- pen brilliance in 10 words by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 29, 2008, 20 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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quite perceptive in no quippy way
I immediately think how illustrations are useful with this fine example, and that makes imbedded even a way of 'keeping pace of children' as the archetpe of real growth is to include love's energy. often a schedule is made for no finer details but tears.
I think too how the feminine could benefit from safety net of attention or time to talk, or how husband said displayed I love cuddling with you you're so precious significantly I spark cognizance I zest to comfort baby by that and it to a doll or doggie (leafing etcetera) in loved model, by repair that's pure with faith not just wait...
congratulations on silver for well spent penning,
called Carolyn
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Yes they are! Great metaphor and depth in brevity...very creative and soft in truth and sadness...congrat's on the Silver...
mystic
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No surprises in this deep and compassionate piece having placed. From the one distant foto of you I've ever seen,the child image could be a relative to this author. Facial features and eyes bare resemblance.
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Quite nice!
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stunning... x
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The picture is so adorable looks like my daughter when she was younger.
you have a gifted way of seeing my friend
unique and precious
God bless you...
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wow!
This,is sad,but then hope buds in the eyes of innocense, i liked this very short 10 word poem
good luck in the contest
...VOE
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I really like the metaphor in this. Great write
Good luck
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thank you cathy
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