Proud to be myself
oh yes I am
I am a much more beautiful person
than you ever know. This is what I wished for
I wish I can stand up
and take a bow.
Let the world
know that I am coming out
of my shell.
Proud to be myself
oh yes I am.
It is me who controls
my life
Who choose the right route
Hate is such a harsh word
Lets never hear that word any more.
I want more people to feel
beautiful, powerful, strong
Let the whole world know
that you are coming out of
your shell
Author notes
this is for people who can feel like their self every day.
Well done to these people
A contest entry
- I feel so alive by samantha jean.
1200 points, ended December 13, 2008, 11 entries
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I really liked this one
thanks for entering -
Ah. A way to make sure you are happy is to be yourself. It makes so much sense! best of luck in the contest.
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i am still a little un certain but I am getting better
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Well I'm experiencing similar thoughts at the momoent so your words were really very wonderful for me. Just the same thoughts, fed up of the ppl saying You're nothing I wanna be more myself now. I loved the lines:
"Let the world
know that I am coming out
of my shell."
Well that's just touching I enjoyed reading it again and again. Your words give me strength but you feel still abit uncertain.
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love the poem! and im a MCR fan to. I love gerard too!!!!! and i really hope bob gets better soon! i can't wait for their next album.
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i hope Bob gets better soon to. He and Ray are my favs in the band
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totally.
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Tabatha
I like this poem. I mostly like how your proud *hince the name* but I say that because to my people think they are not good looking or nice or ok or worthy because of the harsh world. Thank you for entering dear.
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thank you
these are the sort of comments I need to carry on writing poems
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"I am a much more beautiful person
than you ever know. This is what I wished for" - I liked this part a lot, it is very hopeful.
Good write, thank you for entering my contest - and good luck. -
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sammy
thank you for commenting on my poem
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this is great
I really like your poem,
it's good to be for yourself,
Best wishes,
Isabella
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