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Silent Tears

Silent tears
from a child becoming a women
too fast

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photography by ~ Paul Kopeikin

A contest entry

Struggling to find my muse lately :(

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  • SmileyLisa
    December 26, 2008
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    excellent

    POWERFUL WRITE!!!


    • buffsab99
      January 3
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      Thank You

      Thank you so much, it means a lot coming from you


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 29, 2008
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    creatively spoken... x


  • Majija
    November 29, 2008

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    Oh... Too short( I know.. ten words. But I want to read more...)
    Really sad and painful though, but good and very strong.


    • buffsab99
      November 29, 2008
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      Thank You

      Thank you so much, I would have written more but the prompt was for only 40 words.


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 29, 2008

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    great take on the prompt lovely write

    Good luck


    • buffsab99
      November 29, 2008
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      Thank You

      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment


  • LoveLikePoetry
    November 29, 2008

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    For it being really short, I think you really caught the emotion in it. Bravo on that.
    I just don't like the last line, but as for the whole piece, toy did great.
    Good luck in the contest

    • buffsab99
      November 29, 2008
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      Thank You

      Thank you very much. I saw the tears and the makeup and saw a little girl growing up way to fast. Thank you again.

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