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When Angels Cry

Tears...
of sorrowed moments,
stream the face
of eternal hope.

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photography by ~ Paul Kopeikin http://allpoetry.com/contest/2428759

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  • Amethyst MoonShadow
    December 2, 2008

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    Another wonderfully written poem in so few words! Congratulations again on the trophy! So well deserving!


  • hawkeslake gold member
    November 30, 2008

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    I had to really think this through -- how can just 10 words cause a whole meditation! So well done, I can see why it was awarded.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 29, 2008
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    just precious... x


    • Gulfbreeze
      November 30, 2008
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      Gypsy Butterfly

      Thank you so very much for your beautiful comment


  • DolceVito gold member
    November 29, 2008
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    Short but powerful write. Excellent take on the prompt.

  • Bob Fox
    November 29, 2008
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    Oh poet

    No tears ,for your angels smiles down at you and sees a vibrant star on the rising.


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 29, 2008

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    "stream the face of eternal hope" great write. really like this piece

    good luck


  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 29, 2008
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    touching..

    and sad yet written in such a soft way..much luck to you in the contest my friend.


    • Gulfbreeze
      November 29, 2008
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      thank you for your thoughtful review. As always I greatly appreciate your support

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