Terrorism
Have you got eyes?
Then glance at the thickness of blood
Which you showered out, pumping bullets in streams
Have you got ears?
Then hear the blasting sounds of bombs
and the deafening cries of the bereaved
Who lost their kith and kin in the horrible melee
HAVE YOU GOT MIND.,SOUL AND HEART?
Then restrain from these criminal acts
and extricate yourself from the illegal pacts
and eschew the violence from all walks of our precious lives
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Picture Prompts - Reserve - no more than 20 lines by Cannonsfire.
3999 points, ended December 4, 2008, 14 entries
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There are spell errors (glace) - glance (kith d kin) - and?
a full stop and an apostrophe together in first line of last stanza. Time to edit and for me to reread. The poem could be stronger in showing me rather than telling me about terror.
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