Browsing around on the world wide web
when I see something different,
A challenge of words that you cannot use.
the antiword bank,
I was amused.
Tiny words,
Common words,
it's hard to leave these out.
to write a meaningful poem.
I began to fill with doubt.
But I thought and I pondered
and soon I came to find,
that i'd counquered the challenge,
in no matter of time.
Author notes
Hollis69
A contest entry
- The Anti Anti-Wordbank Contest by Loki.
400 points, ended December 14, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pre-writes Only....Give me your 25th poem by PurpleSky.
475 points, ended June 3, 48 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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well congrats on what you were trying to conquer and maybe some notes in your authors spot might help
Thank you so much for taking the time to enter my contest and best wishes to you! 
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Lena -
I love the subtle rhyme in this. I'm glad that you entered your works into my previous contests and hopefully you will in the future AWB contests.
Thank you
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I think this was good. There were a few mistakes, but you already know of those...I wish you the best of luck in your contest.
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Clever but I would suggest using spellcheck. Line four should read "antiword", not aniword and line thirteen should read "challenge" instead of chanllenge. I also found the capitalization at the beginning of each line a bit off-putting. But again, this was a clever answer to an interesting contest prompt.
Nicely done & good luck!
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