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Listening For Reindeer

With hush adrift, moon aglow,
listen intently for bell sound.
Soft white, new falling snow,
begins to blanket the ground.

Special evening has arrived,
night time creeping so slow.
Though impatient, I survived,
anticipation begins to grow.

House really creaks at night,
never really noticed it before.
Laying with eyes closed tight,
wind rattles windows and door.

Listened all night, did not hear,
must have fallen fast asleep.
Jingles bells and the reindeer,
came, went with nary a peep.

Christmas morn so full of joy,
wonder what waits for me.
Stocking of goodies and toys,
what will I find neath the tree.



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  • faithwhisperer silver member
    December 9, 2008

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    Love this picture of the girl, and thinking through her thoughts as she lays down at night. Nicely done. Thanks for the entry, and Merry Christmas!


  • Beret55 silver member
    December 5, 2008

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    Guess weve all tried to say awake to hear od see Santa.. Brings back good mimories...
    Well done Sandy.


    • Sandygram
      December 6, 2008
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      Well Ho Ho Ho and thank you. Always nice to have you pop in here and read. You taKke care my friend. Hugs and Smiles,
      Sandy

  • Eusebius
    November 29, 2008

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    Ahhh...just wonderful and so FULL of Christmas! It most certainly puts one completely in the "spirit" of the Season! Just great!!!

    • Sandygram
      November 30, 2008
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      Lovely Comment.

      Good Morning Michael, You know how much I appreciate your thoughtful comments. I value your opinion so much. So glad you enjoyed reading. Take care and have a wonderful day. Hugs and Smiles.

      Sandy

  • Bob Fox
    November 29, 2008

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    Oh yes poet

    and the beauty of Christmas past and present and hopefully the future. You, the pet, weaves a magic wand. Merry Christmas to all.

    • Sandygram
      November 30, 2008

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      Good Morning My Friend

      So glad you stopped by to read this and you enjoyed it. Was a fun poem to write. You take care. Hugs and Smiles, Sandy


  • Puppydog gold member
    November 29, 2008

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    AW, SO CUTE!!!!

    I can remember trying my best to stay awake and one year actually caught my dad putting presents under the tree and eating the cookies and milk I had set out for Santa, boy were my dad and mom trying to decide just what to say to me!'s

    • Sandygram
      November 30, 2008
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      Good Morning Kevin

      Thank you my friend. A lovely coment. I appreciate you reading. Hope all is well with you and you had a wonderful Thanksgiving. Take care, Sandy


  • Kappa Pyua
    November 29, 2008

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    cute little story of the child who tried to be notty then fell asleep, lol. Every kid wants to see santa. Thanks for sharing this really cute story.UNT


    • Sandygram
      November 30, 2008
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      Thank you for reading. Glad you enjoyed. I appreciate your comment. Take care, Sandy

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