It's words and rhyme.
It's feelings in time.
It's about letting yourself go.
Never worrying what others think.
It's for you that you write these things.
Some may take joy,
Be in awe.
Some may not like it at all.
It's their choice.
You have yours.
You do it with every inch of your soul.
When you are young,
When you are old.
It brings you that little bit of peace.
It makes the the thoughts of pain and sadness cease.
It keeps you on the line to sane.
Some haters think it's all in vain.
But we "the united" know why we put pen to page.
Or fingertip to key.
It's the passion that is building inside.
It's the seed.
And from it comes a flower.
It may be ugly and torn.
It may be beautiful and bold.
It may be read or left to waste.
Comments or none we leave our mark in this place.
A mark the world can peruse at will.
May it brighten their day,
Give them light in a dark place.
Let them know they are not alone.
See the sorrow of their fellow man
And his woe.
Know that when they are feeling alone
There is a place they can call home.
A contest entry
- Give Me Anything! by ToxicSuicide.
700 points, ended March 22, 64 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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700 points, ended February 20, 281 entries
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What did you think
Comments
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This is amazing, I'm suprised more people haven't read this poem. It describes perfectly the relationship every writer has with allpoetry. You did what not most can do, wrote about nothing yet everything. I applaud you for that, BRAVA! Thank you so much for sharing your beautiful poem with me and for entering my contest. Good luck!
~ToxicSuicide.
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aww yea, we all know that AP is like our home. oh wow, this is so well expressed. i love this, and AP is an awesome place. whatever you have mentioned here is just so true. your first stanza really captured my attention, and it stayed with me throughout the entire poem. well done AGAIN! amazing write. keep penning, this is wonderful.
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But we "the united" know why we put pen to page.
Or fingertip to key.
It's the passion that is building inside.
It's the seed.
my fave, fave, feave stanza. I cant get enough of ur poems. I wish I had the same flow that you have. I really do. -
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no no no
our styles are uniqie. urs is beautiful. U need not change. Yours are stories... every pain told. Mine are something different... yours are gold
GOD DAMN.. I got the ryhming bug lol
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