"The gift I have for you cannot be taken,
Only given."
And you stopped walking and beckoned me closer;
Your lips were then on mine,
"Ugh, chewing gum"
You said and I just rolled my eyes to the skies and smiled,
Walking faster to the place where we would meet with my friends.
The day was 3 months in the making,
3 months since we last exchanged lips,
[Tongues].
I forgot how much I missed you;
How much I missed all of this.
Cut to Pizza Hut,
You by my side,
Under the table you held my hand;
Fingers intertwined.
And you spoke so nicely to me,
Said how you missed my face,
My body,
My 'stupidity'
I told you you loved it all,
And you didn't deny.
Then, out of the blue at the table,
[I had retreated into my thoughts,
A sadness crossed my face]
You looked into my eyes,
"Te Amo"
I just looked at you in shock,
"Do you have any idea what that means?"
You asked
"Yes" I sighed.
"Well then" you replied and smiled.
I have fallen prey to your piercing dark eyes,
Seven months until we can fully commit;
Will what we have stand the test of time?
Author notes
[x] 100% True and Personal
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"Te Amo" - "I Love You"
And the two of us are back to where we never started; casual.
But I care too much to let him go
(Update: I haven't heard from him since that day. My friend told me he's moved 3 hours away.)
In a list
*sigh* you still have me
Comments
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"I have fallen prey to your piercing dark eyes,
Seven months until we can fully commit;
Will what we have stand the test of time?"
I loved the ending it was very powerful and tied the poem up perfectly. I also loved all the familiar referances to places like 'pizza hut' It made it feel so real
great write
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Aw, this poem was such a beautiful retelling of what happened between these two people, I was really rooting for the relationship to work out. So I was kinda sad when I got to the author's notes and saw the update. Still, thank you for posting this, it made me happy to read it.
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Awh thank ya for your words.
Yeah, it ended between us 3 months ago, but we're seeing each other casually and won't be able to be bf/gf until at least June so I hope things work out.
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