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Swirling in
Yesterday’s whirlpool
She longs
For a better tomorrow
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A contest entry
- pen brilliance in 10 words by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 29, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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interesting and i think everyone wants a better tomorrow
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Congratulations on honorable mention. I love the short sweet ones a lot. They can say so much with just the right words. It is like a quote that would fit with the picture in my head. Brilliant.
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lovely...
I love how you make me swirl with this
Congratulations on the HM, you are very good!
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creatively engaging... x
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Pretty!
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ah, lovely write
I really like this one
Good luck
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WOW
Read a few of those contest "in ten words" and such. Didn't think much could be made of it. Boy, Have I got a lot to learn
Your few words makes my mind wonder... what was the whirlpool? will she find her better tomorrow?
A very good write. Thanks for sharing and good luck
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