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Young Girl

In her room she cries alone,
For forgotten birthday's and a broken home,
Evrybody thinks she's tough,
They don't know she's seen enough.

Just a young girl all alone,
Screaming in her broken home,
While the world spins by outside,
Nobody cares this young girl died.

Author notes

This is a basic poem, it is about a young girl who suffered in her life and so committed suicide. My last 2 lines however are supposed to express the fact that while this girl suffered and then died nobody cared because she was simply a 'Young Girl'.
Please remember that while your life may be hard and you may care for those that have died in your own life, Just remember that there are others in the world who no one notices when they go missing.
Give these people a moments silence.
Blessed Be
xoxoxo

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