jesus, please look after mummy,
she is now your angel.
Author notes
iread the rules and thank you for another great contest
A contest entry
- pen brilliance in 10 words by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 29, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what are your favourite parts?
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Wonderful
short, but very creative. So very well done. Thank you for sharing.
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how beautifully sad... x
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This is very beautiful and emotional piece. I hope you do well.
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Lovely piece Tony, I can relate. Best wishes always.
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aww... why is everyone making this sooo sad!!
theres another peice where she lost her daddy. this poor girl. why couldn't she just be crying over a toy or something that is fixable!!!!
this is a very emotional write..very powerful
good luck to you
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at last, a ten word sentence that really hurts the heart strings, very well done,
edit,
I return to say, the rest are not up to this standard, you have a very good chance of gold here. well done.
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