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Solidified Sustenance

I sometimes wish, to ease complexity,
That things would never change in front of me
So seldom would I find perplexity
In nature's blend of pure variety

I often wonder, just singularly,
How rivers without salt become the sea
Or how it ever truly came to be
That I, among this routine, can be free

I hadn't thought, through ignorance or glee,
The world would keep on changing rapidly
Despite its age and weakening degree
But proof itself is our reality

Amazed that, after all this time, I see
The simplest of seeds grow frantically
And while this beauty outgrows misery
I'm left with no cause but to disagree

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  • Angelica Rose
    December 2, 2008
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    Very thought provoking...


  • Never Fall in Love
    November 29, 2008

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    Nah, I don't like the ending. Too optimistic for me - it could also be that it differs with the rest of the rhymes.