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The Key to Where.

 

 

 

Locked inside metal bars.
Key is thrown away.
Clutching meaninglessly through cage.
Left here all alone,
Imprisoned and then abandoned.
Never to escape,
Never to be let free.
For in this caging jail cell,
I am locked away in your heart
forever.

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    February 23, 2009

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    Cool, great stuff!!!

    Great use of metaphor, imagery & poetic device to express an all consuming emotional depth...
    Another great write...
    Well done!!!


  • Hannie
    December 1, 2008

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    Gosh....Awesome poem (once again). Ur locked away in my heart wether u like it or not. Hopefully u like it there enough that i can let u keep the key tho . Love the poem stax. Good luck in the contest

    Ur bestest friend.
    Hannie.


  • SageyBaby
    November 30, 2008
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    I loved this. Simple and sweetly sorrowful. Great write, as expected.


  • UnravledLove
    November 29, 2008

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    This is pretty neat I like how you said locked away in your heart. Good luck and thank you for entering.

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