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flooding cheeks

Missing image
toy irretrievable
tears welled up.
bursting heart
overflowing eye banks.

Author notes

photography by ~ Paul Kopeikin


A contest entry for:
pen brilliance in 10 words

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 29, 2008
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    descriptively creative... x


  • maralisa silver member
    November 29, 2008
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    aw abrilliant take onthe promt good luck inthe contest maralisa


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 29, 2008

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    OMG...I just told the person below your entry that she should be crying over a toy or something...lol. here it is! I like "tears well up; bursting heart; overflowing eye banks"
    well especially the "overflowing eye banks" great write!
    Good luck to you

  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 29, 2008
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    OMG...I just told the person below your entry that she should be crying over a toy or something...lol. here it is! I like "tears well up; bursting heart; overflowing eye banks"
    well especially the "overflowing eye banks" great write!
    Good luck to you