"God,
Please
Take the pain away! I want to live!"
Author notes
So many children are taken out of healthy life to cancers, diseases...This is her cry!
A contest entry
- pen brilliance in 10 words by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 29, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Constructive comments please
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Beautifully Poignant...
Thank you for sharing your heart-and-soul-felt poem with all of us, you brought a tear to me ol' Irish eyes... Bless you for caring about our little innocent ones. You are an angel. 
Wishing you all the best in life, always. 
Peace, luv & hugs, xx Cyn xx 
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sincerely heartfelt... x
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aww... wow this is so strong and poerful. amazing write, keep penning
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This picture makes the heart ache and this poem, sentance, words make the heart ache more. The plea to live and be healed is shining in the words making me feel the sadness of being ill as a child and unable to be happy in life.
Just deeply wonderful and touching.
Much love
~Noor
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oh, this is really sad
a powerful piece full of emotion...
Good luck to you
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powerful.
Smile♫
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This is so sorrowful and yet so beautiful.. I feel the tears on my cheeks after reading this. The simplicity of this is so unique, it really feels like a child has written this, making it all the more poignant. Ahh, such an emotive write.. so moving.. makes me cry. Well done Aunty Rose.
love and blessings to you always x
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