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Deathly Proof.


Watching blood run.
Feeling sharp sting.
Holding glistening knife.

Proof that I can feel.
Proof that I am here.

Living in a world of nothingness.

The only time I feel alive
is when I'm dying.


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  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    February 23

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    Moving piece...

    And one I can very much relate too, expressed so eloquently in so few words...
    Keep up the good work...
    Well done!!!



  • xXemo-teddybearXx
    January 6

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    this was really good
    it was short but to the point and great emotion
    most people cant do that
    and you did
    very good job
    thankyou for entering my contest
    xXalyXx

  • misterfish
    December 5, 2008

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    thats really good. I like this poem. It speaks deep and strong, even through so few words. It is a brilliant poem. Well done.


  • Deathcore
    November 29, 2008
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    short and sweet...and very dark. nice


  • samantha jean
    November 29, 2008

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    "The only time I feel alive
    is when I'm dying." - Very good way to end this piece.
    Good write, thanks for entering my contest, and good luck.


  • Hannie
    November 29, 2008
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    woooow......Awesome poem dani....good luck in the contest!!

    Hannie.

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