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Rainbows. . .

Glisten with vibarant colors
Of gods artistry
In hues of blues, reds and yellows
or
Rainbows are dim and grey
Depending on  the colors we see.
So
Chase the brighter rainbow.
And it's beauty will whisper...
Together we will fly away
And seek my trasures therein.
Your life...
Is that same rainbow.
It shines or dims
Depending
On one's Dreams and Beliefs.


dragonheart1

Author notes

Option 4. - Word Bank
- Rainbow
- Together
- Glisten
- Grey
- Fly
- Whisper

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What rainbow are you chasing?

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  • geckogirl silver member
    August 11
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    a inspirational piece.


  • storiesuntold gold member
    December 6, 2008

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    So true are your words

    And for all to know even if the world about us seems gloomy and hard to cope with always keep that light burning within and it will guide us through


  • Mariana gold member
    November 29, 2008
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    'Chase the brighter rainbow.
    And it's beauty will whisper...
    Together we will fly away'

    Beautiful imagery...Well done

    Mariana


  • Hannie
    November 29, 2008
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    Awesome take to the prompt. Very very well written.

    Good luck and thanks for entering!

    Hannie.


  • maralisa silver member
    November 29, 2008
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    a brillliant use of the word bank your imagery is beauiful and I love your concept that your life is that same rainbow it shines it dims depending on ones dreams and beliefs good luck inthe contest maralisa

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