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Wishful Thinking

Everyday I open my eyes
  and I think of you......my sunshine
     
It doesn't end there
  I think about you all the time

I feel you think about me too
  but what I feel doesn't change a thing

Wishful thinking on my part
  but is it possible......the ring?

The signs we give each other
  tells a lot...but it doesn't say a word

Sometimes I feel you'll ask me out
  no benefit of doubt..the thought is absurd

But I must say that the words you use
  give me my daily smiles and spark in me a light

But maybe you say them in a friendly way
  maybe you don't mean it to make my day bright

Why do you make me think about you?
  It hurts because nothing is going to change

Why do you enchant me with your words?
  I feel you like me too...but that thought is strange

Wishful thinking on my part
  I'm not sure of any such love

See how you've confused me???
  you've turned me into a vulnerable dove

I can't stop dreaming about an 'us'
  I just can't do it .. it makes me feel incomplete

But I know nothing is going to happen between you & me
  but you never stop crossing my thoughts..what can I do..I'm weak

I feel things are going to happen one day
  but that day seems too far away from sight

I hope that day will come when the both of us are together
  with you decked in a handomse black suit and me dressed in white

Wishful thinking envelopes me
  I'm at its mercy...as you can see...
 
 

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Wishful thinking.....

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  • incondite
    January 27
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    Thanks for your entry and good luck.


  • gigglesalot
    January 6

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    I think the flow of this is a little rough. some of the longer sentences make it kinda awkward to read. overall though its a cute poem filled with longing and wishing. it sucks to like someone so much but you cant have them.