As I wake up this morning
The clouds are dark and grey
You left without a warning
This is my saddest day.
Outside the sky is weeping
Soft tears upon the ground
Into the earth they're seeping
Whilst you are homeward bound.
I hear a Blackbird singing
A song so sweet and clear
And I know he is bringing
A message to me here.
He says that you are keeping
a watchful eye on me
That I can catch you peeping
If I have eyes to see.
The clouds are slowly moving
Into Infinity
The weather is improving
Now you are here with me.
A contest entry
- Goodbye My Friend by Peachy.
550 points, ended December 13, 2008, 37 entries
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Comments
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ah this is lovely, really sweet and touching, good luck in the contest
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Lovely
Very well written poem here and it gives the reader warm feeling indeed
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EGGCELLENT
Beautiful bittersweet write lots of imagery and a good flow
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Awwwww!!!!!!!!!!!
This is beautiful!
I love it! The last stanza is just brilliant and it makes me smile in a sad sort of way XD
Thank you for entering and good luck!
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