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Delivery Assistant

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He's ready to help Santa
deliver Christmas cheer,
listening for those sleigh bells
with hand up to his ear.

He's dressed to play the part
keenly searching in the sky,
for he wants to help all children
as they sleep on by and by.

Wondering why Santa's late
he knew he should have phoned,
as he shuffles to and fro
with the softest little moan.

"Come on Santa time to go
I want my presents too,
but if you're gonna be so late
you'll have the longest queue!

I've been so good all through the year
my mum will tell you so,
sent you my list of presents
that on me you can bestow.

I'm dressed and ready to do my part
giving others Christmas cheer,
so come on Santa hurry up
'cos I've been waiting one whole year!!"










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  • penman gold member
    December 25, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very creative as always. Congratulations on the bronze.


  • Margaret Denham gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    This is gorgeous and the picture is sooooo cute...what a little sweetie!! If only all of Santa's helpers were like this one

    Best of luck in the contest.

    Love Margaret

    P.S. Is it too late for me to send off my wish list for the little fella to pass on?


  • Poetryintheblood silver member
    December 1, 2008
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    Awwww sis this is just adorable, and it's him all over, love you always Josie xoxo


  • leeshylou
    November 30, 2008

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    cute poem - you have put words to my picture perfectly.. Thank You very much for entering my contest and doing my sons picture such justice

  • LoveLikePoetry
    November 29, 2008
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    This is really cute
    I loved it, made me laugh and smile


  • EmeraldDreams
    November 29, 2008

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    Such a cute poem! I love this, it fits the picture perfectly! Its so bright and uplifting.

    You have set a wonderful scene here, best of luck in the contest.


  • dabpunx
    November 29, 2008
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    cruel joke
  • Bob Fox
    November 29, 2008

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    So cute

    this write seems to fit perfectly with the picture and I think I hear santa roaring with delight. Merry Christmas to all poet.

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