A Sojourn's trek
along cursed path
of fates corridor
as metronome sways
recording footfalls.
I...
weary of meandering
on shriveled toes,
destination's finale unclear.
No sign of relenting agony
bestowed upon brittle body.
Exhaustion my adversary,
consuming all promise felt
while solitude strangles
this path I trod.
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Picture Prompts - Reserve - no more than 20 lines by Cannonsfire.
3999 points, ended December 4, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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I think that you did a nice job with the picture prompt life is a journey that is hard but the reward at the end is worth it thanks for sharing good luck in the contest be well.
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*please do not comment or rate this thankyou*
Strong images of life's weariness of journey that for some never find a good outcome. Nice job
C
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Oh My~
Love how You took the picture and added a Strong voice to accompany
Wonderful use of -shriveled toes-
and -solitude strangles-
Keep that quill dancing my Friend
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes in the contest too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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