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Till The End-xox

can you taste my tears,
so far away from me.
do you hear my prayers,
feel my want and my need.

desire fuels this heart,
passions fills my veins.
longing for this to start,
to replace ancient pains.

it's like forever and a week,
until you'll be beside me.
but your love is all i seek,
And your all my eyes can see.

I will wait for you,
you, my sweetest friend.
what else can we do,
but play it till the end.
.....................

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  • BloodyTears13
    January 3
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    Simply Amazing!!!!!


  • PuRfekly-Phlaw3d
    December 1, 2008
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    amazing

    very good,very good


  • ckwriter69
    November 30, 2008

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    good write Natasha, I hope everything works out for you. good rhyming and way to bring out your emotions. Keep writing.


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    November 29, 2008

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    Beautiful

    Awe what can one say about this poem but other than it is awe inspiring. I really admire how your poem here really flows and gets straight to the point and sticks with it from start to finish. any ways its amazing the effects of love has upon us. any ways just a beautiful write and keep up the good work.

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