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A Lease On My Heart

Our eyes met through
a crowded street
It seemed for a moment that
time did stand still
My stomach filled with butterflies
My heart began to beat faster
A quick smile captured me
When you touched my hands
I knew then in that second
We were bonded like no other
This connection leaves me
breathless
Like I'm drowning in water
My love cant be bought
Not by jewelry or flowers
I don't want to be owned
Nor chained like animal
But do not worry my dear
You can always rent my heart
I shall sign a lease to you
All you have to do is except
Kiss me upon my lips
Lets seal this contract of love
My heart will be for you to take
care of
Be gentle with it always
You shall be my new shelter
A place I can call home
So be my sanctuary in this life
And you can rent my love
Until my last breath escapes
my lips

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  • DramaQueen469 gold member
    December 2, 2008
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    Awww I love the message in this poem!! Well done and thankyou for entering!!

    ~*~DramaQueen469~*~


  • AAA Taurus The Bull gold member
    November 29, 2008
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    Like this

    This is, by far, the best thing I have read today
    The love thing is always powerful. The rhyming is fantastic, as well as the imagery. Definitely worthy. There was no error. No typos. Nothing to change. Check out one of mines, I look forward to your next write