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Of what I hope will be

Somehow you made your way
Deep into my song
No matter how long I sing
I can't get you out of me

Even when I smile
You are reflected and
I catch a glimpse
Of what I hope will be

suede

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  • Blueskywonder
    November 30, 2008
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    ah... this is beautifully sad.


  • LoveLikePoetry
    November 29, 2008

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    I really liked this
    I feel like the first stanza wasn't really the beginning though, if that makes sense.
    But other than that, I really liked it Keep up the good work <3