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The Glimmer

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I watch faithfully for the glimmer
of your guiding light to shine
needing You even more tonight.

It seems my sadness draws me closer
in search for that perfect answer
I can't seem to find till You point it out.

I look ahead hoping for just a glimpse...
knowing the very sight will soothe my aching heart
restoring my faith as it douses all doubt.

My arms for You, I do stretch forth in search
I am Yours, my Lord, Your child willing to learn
all and any lessons given unto me by You.

Always wanting to share in praises of glory
feeling elated inside, I can now see Your light,
I must hurry along, following its glimmer tonight!

 

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  • Hikari Lady
    November 29, 2008
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    So much faith and deep humblness. I enjoyed this read and really felt calm inside my heart. Indeed, we should always grasp the lessons HE teachs us, for he always teachs us what's best for us.
    Wonderful poetry that earned the Silver fairly.

    Much love
    ~Noor


  • Mary O gold member
    November 29, 2008
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    You glimmer here with love and humility, Well done and Congratulations
    ~Mary O


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 29, 2008

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    Ah..well thought and well knitted poetry of your inside..love it..and well done..my friend..thanks for sharing...