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Pleasure in Creation

That blank canvas
sprawled out calmly,
lightly beneath me
felt the air's seductive tinge.

That sensuous rhythm
at which materials intertwine
Oh, it's waiting to get plastered
with only the finest paint of ecstasy.

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I don't know where this came from...but it did.

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  • rainbows. gold member
    July 7

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    Wow. The imagery and metaphor in this was brillaint. This all flowed so well together. Thanks for entering this into my contest.


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    December 4, 2008
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    Terrific poem
    This was good


  • Tadd
    November 30, 2008
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    well writen