A name I have heard many times to describe
Daughters of preachers is a church whore
They may sleep with many members of the church
And town but they are not whores
They are blessed by the holy father to
Give pleasure to his followers and they are pure
And virgin after every session of church
Knowing that if it were found out what they do
Their fathers may take a taste and like
What they give to the other members
Possibly giving them the gift of mans seed
So they will be a church mother instead of a church whore
Author notes
This is what I thought of when I read the title. I just went with it. I don’t write to impress others so if you like it then great if you don’t then oh well. 9/5/08
what do you think of it i think i maybe should change it
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most people think that a poem has to have a rythem, but this is a poem of the saints. im glad i found it
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really its not. its more about the good little church girls having a seperate side..or good little church boys
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I might like it if it were poety.
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it is poetry..just not rhyming
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i liked it! it was a very good example of freewriting technique. I especially liked the ending. ironic yet classy. Although i'm guessing that this relates lto you in a way due to the first line.
So, all in all, a vey pleasant-to-read piece of writing. It seemed more like a small story to be honest which i think is a very good quality to have. ^_^
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nope this is just a title i decided to you. it had no personal meaning to me
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