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Echos Of My Soul

The tears that I shed are just the echoes of my soul
Feeling the sadness while my heart shows its love for you
Wishing to put away the sadness so that the echoes
Could be for your love and sing of the love I give you

Looking at you I feel safe and knowing that
Is a good thing I wish to still feel safe with you
Hiding in your arms while others call me weak
Needing you to be there for me when I start to crack

Wishing to be in your arms now
Knowing that you are the heat that my body requires
To keep me warm in this cool autumn air
Wishing never to go another day without hearing your voice

Author notes

This is what I feel whenever I am near the one that I love. He is the one that is dear to my heart. This is written on 9/5/08 and it will be held forever in my heart.

what do you think of it i think i maybe should change it

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  • shiratikva
    September 21, 2009
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    This is very emotional write. It's a great thing to feel safe in somebody's arms.
    Lovely piece