A thought deep in mind
Memories of the past
A lifetime of expression
A room full of silence
No rest for the user
No end to the circle
A dash of contentment
A pound of regret
Lost in the shuffle
Forgotten by most
The silence is so loud
Poetry at night
When sleep is unabtainable
Not even the dark
Can send in the slumber
Creeping down the hallways
Not to make a noise
They all rest peacefully
While I walk the floor
Send me a reason
Tell me a lie
Put me back
In the land of the normal
Help shut my eyes
Dreams are my salvation
Yet silence creeps
Please tell me what you think
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this is an awsome write don
you said it like it is
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Thank you for such a wonderful comment and applause. Happy you enjoyed it. Don
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WONDERFUL!!!!
Oh how that lonliness can keep you awake and uneasy! The sweet dreams of contentment are so hard to come by at times.
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Thank you for the compliments on my poem. Happy to hear you enjoyed it. Don
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Silence can be deafening...
So can the lonliness... great job!!! You always manage to pull off a new spin on life's profound imagery. 
As they say, keep it flowing... 
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Thank you Cyn for the compliments on my poem. I agree. Lonliness can be deafening also. Happy to hear you enjoyed it. Don
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haha forgot to add
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Wow! Totally loving the description words! Nice write
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Thank you for the compliments on my poem. Happy to hear you enjoyed it. Don
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The reason for the angst, my friend
Is because the message you send
Does not rhyme, does not rhyme
This is why you're down this time
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Thank you for the comment and compliments on my poem. Don
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A cry out of desperation. Very thought provoking piece you have penned here. A mix of feelings giving us the ingredients to let our souls free to roam in the lines of poetry. Liked "the silence is so loud, Poetry at night". Don't we all spend our nighttime trying to wrap our thoughts in meaningless words?
Excellent write!
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Thank you Rachel for the compliments on my poem. Happy to hear you enjoyed it. Don
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You have penned the "silence" with a quill that begs for rest. When all is quiet our minds tend to meander, and for the poet, inspiration, and exquisite musing, as you have written here. My insomnia makes blaring noises on many nights. An excellent example of night thought!
Much Love ♥
Renee
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Thank you Renee for the compliments on my poem. Happy to hear it relates well. Don
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"Silence creeps".Yes my friend I have felt the very same silence and it seems endless so I can sympathise and yet from the very same silence can come inspiration.You have it here on paper.Well done, Ros
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Thank you Ros for the compliments on my poem. Your comment is well recieved. I agree. Don
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