I shake and twist
Can I be loved?
Can I give love?
I don't know
It's new to me
Been rejected and rejected too many
Too many times
Terrible
What
Should
I
Do?
I want to love her
I want her to love me
In time
But I don't want to fall if she rejects me
Can't fall again
Not into that pit
I escaped the darkness once and I refuse
To go back.
So
What
Should
I
Do?
Does anyone have any advice for me? Anything is welcome.
Comments
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Theres A lot To Lose In Things We Dont Do.
Love its worth falling over and over for.
Cause once you do find it, it'll be like your on top of the world. whereas if you avoid it in fear of getting hurt you'll never find it, or it'll pass.
Love is a dangerous game like that of course we're bound to get hurt over and over in search for it its that hurt that we feel time and time again by others that indicates when we've found the 'one'.
"You will Never Fall In Love, If You Dont Fall At All" - Lostphrophets.
and plus dont be so negative give her a chance, if it doesnt work out then you was never destined for her in the first place so you wont be losing anything. on the other hand if she is?...whoed be losing then?
but about the poem? i liked it, its good you expressed yourself well and thats the most important part of any poem. xx

