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Fools Hope

Feeling that same thing,
looking over my shoulder,
some sign you're alive.

Tingle of winter breeze,
a quick look on the street,
just to see if you're there.

Just when I think I've given up,
I'll see a stranger pass by,
and I speak to him just in case.

You might be in the next car,
perhaps he looks like you,
I still want you.

Going on with life,
pretending that I've forgotten,
when I cant ever.

A pitiful fools hope,
tied around my heart always,
just in case.

The hope of sunset,
and you at my door,
seems too good to give up.

A quick glance out the window,
you might be on the corner,
looking for me......
but I'm looking for me too.

Please tell me what you think

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  • Master Warious
    December 5, 2008
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    Who are you looking for?

  • AAA Taurus The Bull gold member
    November 29, 2008

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    good

    Wonderful truth in you words... There's such depth here... and hope. Well-done and well deserving There was no error. No typos. Nothing to change. Check out one of mines, I looking forward to your next write