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This poem has been withdrawn for this competition.
A contest entry
- North Korea by unknownpleasure.
400 points, ended December 16, 2008, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is getting gold, although I'm not sure if the reason I find it so good is intentional or otherwise...
I hope its a classy and deeply witty comment on censorship and information, but even if it's not, that's how I'm choosing to read it. Well done! -
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An excruciating and powerful piece of poetry I, wonderfully, you capture the truth , This is very well done. very much enjoyed powerful ending. There was no error. No typos. Nothing to change. Check out one of mines, I looking forward to your next write
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This was not truth sorry it was a story told to the author. The author was not a Marine
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oh, those poor marines who didn't know what they were doing. I really do pity them. Too bad they didn't really make the retreat from Chosen.
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ea the story was not true and do not start about American Marines.
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