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I'll love you more each day

I catch a glimpse  
From out of my eye
A beautiful figure
A star in the sky

I turned my head
And you were gone
Disappeared
Like the morning dawn

Thought I lost you
I’m felt with fear
but you kiss my eyes
before I shed a tear

Something sweet I taste
Lips of lace
I open my eyes
To see your face

They wrap around my hand
Your fingers in mine
a perfect match they make
When they are entwined

Forever we'll be
Together, you’ll see
Even when you’re miles away
I’ll love more each day

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I know it's not very good, but I thought I'd post it anyway. I've tried to fix it many times, but I can't...I just don't want to change it. Maybe if I think of a good reason...I will.

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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