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Collectedness

Conferment fades the distance between me and myself.
I am not the mercy that sometimes I need.
Just let me plead my case amongst the fury of my own mind.
Maybe I can be blind a while
and let myself bleed.
Is there nothing there or is there substantially?
Does it burn sufficiently within my reach.
Do I learn the lessons that amplify lies
or do I realize there is no empathy?
Maybe I am not my authentic self
and maybe I am not what I should be,
Or maybe there's a lesson that I can teach myself
if only I can let myself
reach my connectedness.

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  • Jonathan ROBIN
    November 9
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    Mind question asked may prove vain task or time-trap intellectual,
    Acceptance cask may open - bask in sharing most effectual ...


  • Swangrnv gold member
    February 23
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    deep

    flowing, i like this piece!