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A kiss that strayed

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It wasn’t supposed to be,
that those lips that so
restfully fit mine
would find their way
back a second time.

That they would remind me
that a touch left untouched
would be nothing more
but a kiss that strayed
away once before.

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© Oisin

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  • Night Hope gold member
    January 1

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    Elegance defined. A touch left untouched...so sad.


  • Nicolette gold member
    November 28, 2008

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    This made me think of making up. Lovely soft, sensual and romantic poetry. Loved the idea of a "strayed kiss"!

    ~ Nicolette

  • tara wilson gold member
    November 28, 2008

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    beautiful, i feel those kisses we give slowly all over...it's nice to feel a reunion like this with a lover, like lips coming back together in a kiss once strayed, lovely & so nice to read your poetry again=)