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elegant

green parrot chirping
for her mate,
nostalgic in her song
missing node discernible.

messaging in wind
forlorn bird looking sad
eyes deep in thought
in memories of her mate.

but it sat elegant on branch
onlookers didn't notice pain.

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  • The Fun House silver member
    December 14, 2008

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    Nature is indeed wonderous and there is nothing like animals to watch. A beautifully crafted poem indeed


  • maralisa silver member
    November 29, 2008
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    aw a very deep and sad poem dad good luck inthe contest maralisa