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the Poetic Grin


It’s turned to a game called “The Poetic Grin.”
Mischievous? Maybe, but not quite a sin.
The goal is to catch someone slightly off-guard.
If you remain in control, it’s not very hard.

There are no certain rules, no victory to take. 
Embarrassing your friend is the outcome at stake.
It’s best with those you’ve not seen in a while.
It starts when you flash them a masquerade smile.

As small-talk begins, you’re setting the bait. 
The best strategy to use is patiently wait.
“What cha’ been up to?” they’ll usually ask.
That’s when you put on the “innocent” mask.

“Oh not much, well, … there is one thing …
I’ve been writing poetry since early last spring.
I think it’s my ticket to fortune and fame!”
The next one to speak then loses the game.

You’ve painted them in with no where to go.
You had to be joking, but they don’t really know.
From puzzled responses to priceless retorts.
Most can’t hold back as laughter resorts.

“Get out” they’ll say, “You’re pullin’ my sleeve.” 
Respond with, “Is it really that hard to believe?”
Give them that face like your feelings are hurt. 
“You don’t like poetry?” then softly assert.

Then watch them retreat, not knowing what’s true.
Making fun is not something they wanted to do.
They’ll likely say something like, “Poetry’s nice.
I’ve read a few poems, maybe once, maybe twice.”

The look that they give you can be so much fun. 
Confusion will tell you, the game has been won.
It’s then you will flash them “The Poetic Grin.” 
They’ll never know how to believe you again.

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  • Cyanide Dreams
    February 7
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    haha, this kind of reminds me of somethind Dr.Suess would write. Nicely done. I really liked this. The flow was perfect and the word choice was great. I loved this game so much I think I might try it . The rhythm was absoulutely amazing and I envy your skills at rhyming. I can't rhyme to save my life. Great job and best of luck.

    Josh


  • aboomer silver member
    December 27, 2008

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    cute - smile and make them wonder what you've been up to! and I like how you make your 'announcement' then wait for the next person to say something....lol
    nicely done

    thank you for your entry
    best wishes in the contest


  • RuLives4GodOnly
    December 12, 2008

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    haha! lol! Aw man! I've nearly died laaughing at this very silly game, I which I think would be most fun to play! lol!


  • Harrisham Minhas
    December 3, 2008

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    This is an interesting write.
    A well-flowing piece.
    Though according to the contest rules, the poems in this contest should be of 20 lines or less.
    If you can edit it soon, then you may do so.

    Thanks for your entry.

    Harrisham Minhas

  • eksnugglz
    November 29, 2008
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    very familiar with the subject matter here.
    let the style make em smile. enjoyed the piece.

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