You grow on my wings
I can feel the loss of you
You help me fly
and keep me warm
Without you I am naked
sometimes I feel your stiffness
As I run my beak on you
The thrill I get caressing you
So light and willing
you are my Feather
A contest entry
- Pick a word - Write a poem in 10 lines or less (F) by The Fun House.
1050 points, ended December 14, 2008, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Now this is creative and quite a lovely write. I like the image of the bird preening. I really enjoyed this piece.
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something about this kind of speaks more then a bird cleaning herself, i like this poem, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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cute write Antipodi. Creative and enjoyable.
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