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Watched once

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I didn’t always want to watch
your nakedness in the shower.
I remember a time when water
falling off your breasts was just that,
water washed clean.

And then I touched you,

and it was then that I knew
that my love for you was
flamed by your wet body.

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© Oisin

And then tomorrow.

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  • Night Hope gold member
    January 1

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    As always...graceful & beautiful.


  • Nicolette gold member
    November 28, 2008

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    This is lovely...both spiritual and sensual - just like love is - the power of touch.... Great to see you writing again, Scott.

    ~ Nicolette


  • tara wilson gold member
    November 28, 2008

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    "and it was then that I knew
    that my love for you was
    flamed by your wet body."


    yes, wet bodies can do this=) i like how this starts out as possibly a friendship, and then i feel that moment where it begins to become a more physical attraction, and the fire of what that feels like, this is excellent, very sensual=)