brilliant firegod
cast my hell to grey walls
iron my face to a steam
crush the seed
sprinkle my eyes
with dreams
A contest entry
- Quickie Pic Prompt by lunarlunacy.
550 points, ended November 29, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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You packed a huge amount into this spare write. Very well done!
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Dude, that's tripped out. I really dig it. Vivid imagery that seems to morph from image to image in the eye of my mind.
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ooooooh more more more
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Interesting write... love the images even as I struggle for a cohesive understanding of the whole. Best of luck.
Ken
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