The fly sat in a whisper
watching dew drops glisten
in rainbow colors of grey;
grey you say,
rainbows are not grey!
They are when you blend them together.
Author notes
Shades of Grey
A contest entry
- With prompts in mind..... by Hannie.
700 points, ended December 15, 2008, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is just stunning. I feel that way sometimes too, you captured so much in this piece. I wanted more. Best to you in the contest
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this is very very very excellent(:
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Wowsers, this is soemthing different from you but I have fallen in love with this little poem, yes everything is a shade of grey when blended together. My bookmarks are filling up you know. Stop it! Best to you in the contest
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Haha so cute.
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aw wow sis a wonderful take onthe promt love your creative imagery good luck inthe contest
*rose sis *maralisa
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Loved the poem. I thought it was great how you said "They are when you blend them together". Great write and good luck. Thanks for entering
Hannie.
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