when i am low
i seem real slow
nothing is right inside
all i can do is try to decide
weather i can go on
or its time to be gone
the problem is all methods have fault
they sometimes bring me to a halt
you see slitting my wrist
i may need you to assist
to drow in a river
i would soon shiver
acid would stain me
you have to agree
drug overdoseing would cause terrible cramp
it would be like organs clamping down
guns take guts
it seems i don't got
nooses give
then you live
gase smell awful
nothing is really lawful
at the end of all this
you might as well live
what do you think? it is rather crappy but any hints?
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This is so true, and i feel all of this, I have considered all sorts of suicide types and the easiest ones I see are drugs and guns but they are somthing I can't get and still if I was to manage that.. it would still be oh so very very hard.
The last line of this peom even gave me a smile. Thank you so much x -
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thank-you so much for the comment.
sorry that you have been here also. so glad that you got a smile tho
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